更新1: may be only correct the these words in those sentences 1. am strongly agree 2. must be talk 3. Many ignorant people afraid 4. We must against
1. I am strongly agree with you that one country should not attack another. agree 系动词，如果前面有 am ，一系就变 agreeing（现在进行式），一系就变 agreed（passive voice），不能不变。呢句睇唔出点够要用现在进行式，所以： I strongly agree... 2. To be a good salesperson
you must 〔删去 be〕 talk to your customers
so your language skills will certainly improve. 唔只改一度㖞 图片参考：.yimg/i/icon/16/10 。Must 同 will/shall/may/can/would/should/might/could 等 modal verbs 一样，系面要跟一个动词。talk 已经得啦，如果一定有 be ，就同第一句一样，一系 talked，一系 talking。但此句系讲「你一定要（经常）同客讲野」，所以 simple present tense 已经得，故删去 be。 3. Many ignorant people afraid that they will catch AIDS from a public toilet. 第一，afraid 系形容词，唔系动词，所以要讲 be afraid。由于前面系 people（多过一个人），所以变成： Many ignorant people are afraid that... 4. We must against the unfair treatment of employees in the workplace due to their race or gender. against 一样唔系动词，而系 preposition。而 must 如上述必须有动词跟住，所以其实漏左一个动词。可以考虑： We must act / work against the unfair treatment...
1. I am strongly agree with you that one country should not attack another. I'm strongly agreeing with you that one country should not attack another.(agreeing) 2. To be good salesperson
you must be talk to your customers
so your language skills will certainly improve. You must be talkative to your customers in order to be a good sale *** an so that your language skills will certainly be improved. (talkative
in order to and so that) 3. Many ignorant people afraid that they will catch AIDS from a public toilet. Many ignorant person is afraid of their possiblity of diagnosing AIDS from a public toilet.( is and diagnosing) 4. We must against the unfair treatment of employees in the workplace due to their race or gender. We must take action against the unfair treatment of employees in the workplace on the basis of gender and race.(on the basis of)
参考: Longman Grammer Dictionary
