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On Excessive Packaging

Nowadays many of our daily used products are over packaging, from the food we eat in plastic bags, the milk we drink in dedicate bottles etc. We can see it not only in supermarket , but also in shopping mall or resturants.
The reason of this phenonmen I finded are as follows. Firstly, it was caused by the pursuing attitude of dedicate packaging from customers, everyone like beautiful packaging.Secondly, execssive packaging can raise the value of the product thus brought the seller much profits.
Above all , I think adquate packaging can be accepted, but not excessive packaging for its huge wast of materious and bad for environment. My suggestion is to limit the packaging materious by law and encourage people to less packaging.

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