Dear Bob
I am writing this letter to inform you that I had find a quite suitable studio for you.
As you concerned that you wanna find a place which is closed to your language school, this studio is located at 11 Fang Cao street and there is a bus stop here, the next stop is Jian Xin Hua Wen school. You can travel between school and home by bus or on foot.
The condition of the room is also great. The bedroom includes one single bed, study table and a sofa. You can also have independent bathroom and kitchen that with full facilities for you use. The total area is 25 sq.m. Rent is ¥500 per month, I think this is a very reasonable price in this area.
If you think it's OK please replying me ASAP, I will pay some bond to reserve this studio for you. I expect we can meet in near future.
Your friend
XXX
同学你好,我给你写的这篇属于雅思类作文。由于是给朋友写信,不属于学术类的文章,所以文中可以用一些缩写。比如wanna it's, ASAP (as soon as possible) 等等。具体的还要按照你们英语老师的要求,你自己再加以修改,祝你取的好成绩。