You are the little girl in my eyes, you are innocent, cute,and full of romantic reveric in your mind. You like describing things around you in beautiful pictures, smiling to your friends. Sometimes, you are afraid of loneliness, and you are fear to live alone, especially thunder when it rains, you will throw your head into the pillow. I hope I can be there when you are afraid, I can by your side in the most lonely moment, then you can have my shoulder. I want to give you a happy and warm home, would you allow me?
You are always a cute girl in my eyes, wearing an air of innocence,
with full of fantasy which make me feel intensely romantic. Everything
leaves a beautiful picture in your mind. You always put a genuine smile
on your face. You are afraid lonely of being alive. I reckon I won't hesitate to scooch on over closer you, dear, when you are hiding in the bed for the fear of the thunderstorm, to compare with you, to give you my shoulder to lean on, to ask the question, 'Would you accept a happy and warm home I made for you?'
……你害怕孤独,害怕一个人的生活,特别是……
这里的“特别是”怎能如实翻译?各位高手们,原文此处本身并不存在一个递进的关系。译文中此处没有直译
In my eyes, you are that do not understand the little girl, lovely, pure, full of romance and fantasy, you like with the surrounding beautiful picture paintedthings, you love with a smile the face of a friend, sincerely treat friends,sometimes you are afraid of loneliness, fear of a person's life, especially whenthe rain thunder, you read in bed not outcrop, and I hope I can make the mostfear in you, when the most lonely accompany you, give you a shoulder to lean on, give you a happy and warm home, will you?
from my point of view,you are the girl that I don't understand,cute,pure,full of fantasy and romantic.You prefer to depict surroundings with wonderful pictures,to present smile to your friends .Sometimes you are afraid of lonelyness,being alive alone,especially when the thunder come,you dare not to outcrop.I wish I could be with you when you are afraid and lonely,present you shoulders and a happy family.The question is "Are you willing to accept it?"