英语书面表达 关于生病

Dear Sally,
I'm sorry to learn that you had a headache and caught a cold, what's more, you failed in your last exam.But, what gone is gone. Now it is important for you to see a doctor, drink more water and have a sound rest. As for your study, you must believe that you can gain a high score next time as long as you study hard.
Yours,
Jill

Dear Sally,
I’m sorry to hear that you had a headache and had a fever; moreover, you did not well in this exam. It doesn’t matter. Don’t be disappointed at it.
You should see a doctor, drinking a lot and have a good rest. Don’t think about anything. After you feel better, you should work hard and try to get good result in next test.
Yours,
Jill

Dear Sally:

I'm sorry to hear that you've caught a cold and you didn't do well in last exam. I'm writing to tell you that you must go to see doctor, drink more water and have a good rest. And study hard and try your best to do better in next exam. Just don't worry!

Yours,
Jill

Dear Sally:
I heard that you were badly ill,and you had headache and cold,about that i feel so sorry.What's more,I think you'd better see a doctor,and think more water.Water is the best medcine.And don't forget to have a rest.I hope my advice will work.I do believe you will get wonderful grades next time,come sally!Work hader,and trust youeself you can!
Love Jill
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