My sister Sarah was born with a bone missing on【in】 her left foot.She can't walk like ordinary people.One day she came home and told me she has【had】 competed in the field day.There were a lot of races.I thought of【of 去掉】 she must have failed,and my minds【mind】 raced as I tried to offer encouragement.So【But】 before I couldn say anything,she said:"IJohn,i won two of the races!" I couldn't believe【it】!Because of her illness,she appears particular【particularly】 weak.I thought she must have been giving【given】 a head start.Again,before I could say anything,he【she】 said:"I didn't get a head start.I just tried hard【harder】 than others!"
on her foot:in her foot
has competed:had cpmpeted
thought of:去掉of
minds:mind
offer:give
so:but
giving:given
particular:too
he:she
hard:harder
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has competed 改成had competed
thought of 改成 thought
so 改成 but
particular改成particularly