请高手帮忙翻译 She Is My Sin ( 她是我的罪)

下面是网上的翻译,太烂了。请高手们帮忙修改!越顺越好!谢谢!!!Take heed, dear heart, once apart 小心留意 亲爱的心 一旦分离 She can touch nor me nor you 她便无法触摸你或我 Dressed as one 剥去身上的皮毛 A wolf will betray a lamb 灰狼将背叛那羊羔 Lead astray the gazers 引导迷途的人们 The razors on your seducing skin 剃刀就在你诱惑的肌肤上 In the meadow of sinful thoughts 抱持罪念的草地 Every flower✀s perfect world 每朵鲜花都是个完美的世界 To paradise with pleasure haunted... 那快感缠绕的天堂 haunted by fear 被恐惧缠绕…… A sin for him 为他犯下的罪 Desire within, desire within 充斥欲望 饱含邪念 A burning veil for the bride too dear for him 深爱他的新娘燃烧着她的面纱 A sin for him 为他犯下的罪 Desire within, desire within 充斥欲望 饱含邪念 Fall in love with your deep dark sin 带着你那深重的罪过坠入爱河 I am the Fallen 我在坠落 You are what my sins enclose 你是引诱我犯罪的圈套 Lust is not as creative As its discovery 淫欲中找不到发明创造 To paradise with pleasure haunted... 那快感缠绕的天堂 haunted by fear 被恐惧缠绕…… A sin for him 为他犯下的罪 Desire within, desire within 充斥欲望 饱含邪念 A burning veil for the bride too dear for him 深爱他的新娘燃烧着她的面纱 A sin for him 为他犯下的罪 Desire within, desire within 充斥欲望 饱含邪念 Fall in love with your deep dark sin 带着你那深重的罪过坠入爱河 Bless me, undress me 祝福我 脱光我 Pick your prey in a wicked way 用那邪恶的方式选择你的祭品 God I must confess 天啊我必须忏悔 I do envy the sinners 我确实嫉妒那些有罪的人 A sin for him... 为他犯下的罪 Desire within... 饱含欲望 A burning veil... For the bride too dear for him... 深爱他的新娘燃烧着她的面纱 A sin for him 为他犯下的罪 Desire within, desire within 充斥欲望 饱含邪念 A burning veil for the bride too dear for him 深爱他的新娘燃烧着她的面纱 A sin for him 为他犯下的罪 Desire within, desire within 充斥欲望 饱含邪念 Fall in love with your deep dark sin 带着你那深重的罪过坠入爱河……
2026年09月17日 07:21
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网友(1):

Take care of the dear heart, once depart 小心留意 亲爱的心 一旦分离
She can't touch you nor me 她便无法触摸你或我
Dressed off the surface 剥去身上的皮毛
A wolf will betray a lamb 灰狼将背叛那羊羔

Lead the people who lost引导迷途的人们
The razors on your alluring skin 剃刀就在你诱惑的肌肤上
The meadow keep evil抱持罪念的草地
However,Every flower is a perfect world 每朵鲜花都是个完美的世界

Paradise with pleasure... 那快感缠绕的天堂
surround by fear 被恐惧缠绕……

A sin for him 为他犯下的罪
With full desire and evil充斥欲望 饱含邪念
A veil of the bride who loving him is burning 深爱他的新娘燃烧着她的面纱
A sin for him 为他犯下的罪
With full desire and evil 充斥欲望 饱含邪念
Fall in love with your with your guilt 带着你那深重的罪过坠入爱河

I am Falling 我在坠落
You are the trap what bring me crime 你是引诱我犯罪的圈套
Creative and discovery lost in lust淫欲中找不到发明创造

To paradise with pleasure... 那快感缠绕的天堂
surround by fear 被恐惧缠绕……

A sin for him 为他犯下的罪
With full desire and evil 充斥欲望 饱含邪念
A veil of the bride who loving him is burning 深爱他的新娘燃烧着她的面纱
A sin for him 为他犯下的罪
With full desire and evil充斥欲望 饱含邪念
Fall in love with your deep dark sin 带着你那深重的罪过坠入爱河

Bless me, discover me 祝福我 脱光我
Pick your prey in a wicked way 用那邪恶的方式选择你的祭品
God I must confess 天啊我必须忏悔
I do envy those sinners 我确实嫉妒那些有罪的人

A sin for him... 为他犯下的罪
Desire within... 饱含欲望
A burning veil...
A veil of the bride who loving him is burning 深爱他的新娘燃烧着她的面纱

A sin for him 为他犯下的罪
With desire and evil充斥欲望 饱含邪念
A veil of the bride who loving him is burning深爱他的新娘燃烧着她的面纱
A sin for him 为他犯下的罪
With full desire and evil 充斥欲望 饱含邪念
Fall in love with you with your guilt 带着你那深重的罪过坠入爱河……

网友(2):

Take heed, dear heart, once apart 留意,甜心,一旦分手
She can touch nor me nor you 便事不关己
Dressed as one 脱下羊皮
A wolf will betray a lamb 狼的本性就会暴露

Lead astray the gazers 迷途者的指引
The razors on your seducing skin 剃刀停驻于你诱惑的肌肤
In the meadow of sinful thoughts 在邪思的温床里
Every flower's perfect world 每朵鲜花都是个完美的世界
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