基本没有语法错误 小得细节比如单词拼写和用法我帮你修改了下
I know it isn't easy to learn Eniglish well,but I have some ideas that may help.You said you found it not easy for you to memorize words.You can always write the new words in you notebook and study them everywhere.You say you often feel very nervous when you speak English.You shoud read English aloud every morning.You don't need to be afraid of making mistakes,because everybody will make mistakes.If you do these well,I belive it will be easy for you to learn English well.I hope you can learn English better.