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英语作文 请指教 若找出每处不足另加5分 I✀m looking forwards to the 29th Olympic Games and wish to contribute my own efforts to it. The exciting moment, Inever forget,when Beijing, the capital of China was proclaimed the finnal winner to host the Olympic Games in 2008 by chairman of the International Olympic Committee. Time flies ,and new Olympics is coming very soon. As a college student, Firstly, I could give voluntary lectures to popularize Olympic knowledge and environment awarness in some residential areas.Secondly,Ialso will use my great enthusiasms to welcome the foreign friends.Finnally we should turn our patriotism into actions of studing hard ,working for the coming Olympic Games and improving ourselves to meet the needs of the country and people. I believe that China will host a "successful,unique,and high-level Olympoaid."谢谢大家 考试考完了 呵呵～～不过还是先来先得吧