Dear Tom
I know (at )what time/when do you go to school.
Let me tell you when I go to school!
Every morning I LEAVE HOME AT 6:50 , I'll walk to the station, and then go to school by bus.
IT IS About 1 kilometers from my home to the school, it is very near. So, I sometimes go to school and go home ON FOOT.
I go to school by bus about 10 minutes, about 20 minutes walk.
这句IT takes 10 minutes by bus and 20 minute on foot from my home to school.
I don't like THE journey TO SCHOOL, because, sometimes I CATCH THE traffic jam. AS To walk, and too slow.这个用it takes too much time会比较符合习惯
On the way to school, I don't often meet my friends and classmates.
第三句:Let me tell you when i go to school
第四句:Every morning i leave home at 6.50, i walk to the station,and......
第五句:It is 1 kilometer from my home to the school, it is so near that i sometimes go to school on foot and walk to home.
第六句:It takes me about 10 minutes to go to school by bus, and 20 for walk.
第七句:......sometimes there is traffic jam.And it's too slow by walking.
第八句:......I seldom meet......
其他大致对。
Dear Tom, I know what time do you go to school and let me tell you when I go to school! Every morning I 6:50 leave home, I'll walk to the station, and then go to school by bus. About 1 kilometers from my home to the school, it is very near. So, I sometimes go to school and go home. I go to school by bus about 10 minutes, about 20 minutes walk. I don't like to go to school by bus journey, because, sometimes traffic jam. To walk, and too slow. On the way to school, I don't often meet my friends and classmates.
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