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2026年09月23日 13:36
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I would like to invite you to climb HuaShan
with me. I am glad to see you at 8 am at the school gate. Compared with taking a
taxi, I prefer going there by bus. Reaching the top of mountain, we could dance
and have a picnic.

We will go back in the afternoon. I believe
that we will have a good time. Looking forward to see you!