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June 8, 2011
Dear Mr. Headmaster,
I am Li Yue, a student from Class 1, Senior II. I am writing to draw your attention to some improper behaviour among us students: littering and scribbling. It makes our school dirty and unpleasant, and does hard to the image of our school. I always feel ashamed whenever I see this. It is clearly not appropriate for a student to litter and scribble about. I wonder if the school could place more dustbins around and set up specific rules against such behaviour. At the same time, students should be encouraged to develop good habits and better behave themselves. I believe that, with the joint efforts of both teachers and students, our school will become a more enjoyable place in the near future.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Li Yue
这个是江苏省 2011年的高考作文
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Dear president:
I am honor that you read my letter.Recently I have more opinion on my school.why?
because there are the two biggest problem at our school. In my remember ,school was very clean.Bur I find a lot of rubbish easily at the school now and I see much graffiti in the wall.To be honest,I think this phenomenon inflence our school's impress.If you deal with it too late.I worry that this phenomenon will damage school's reputation in the future.It's very serious to school. I hope you can pay attention to these problems.
My dream is that the school become better and better.School is a home to students.Maybe you let students feel they are one of the home themselves .Only this way,they will love their school and protect environment of school.
yours sincerely,
Li Yue