2006年中考作文，看看有没有语法错误

I have a dream In 1963 , martin luther king made an exciting speech called "i have a dream". In fact , everyone has dreams as well, certainly including me . My dream is to be an astronaut, it appeared in my mind when i saw "shenzhou 5" flying into the sky. How exciting it was! So i must study hard in order to make my dream come true, and i believe this dream will encourage me to overcome the difficulties.

2026年09月24日 05:32

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In fact , everyone has dreams as well, certainly including me.
---- In fact, everyone has dreams, I do as well.
it appeared in my mind when I saw "Shenzhou 5" fliying into the sky.
---- I have had this dream ever since I saw "Shenzhou 5" fliying into the sky.
So i must study hard in order to make my dream come true
----- So I must study hard now to make my dream come true
and i believe this dream will encourage me to overcome the difficulties
----- With this dream in mind, I will be more encouraged to overcome the coming difficulties.

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