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以上是本人近几年的简单经历,望贵公司看后能给予工作的机会,租赁业是一个具有尽争力的行业,我会踏踏实实做好每一份工作,不懂就问, 虚心接受,,竭尽全力为公司争取所有利益,以及为公司业务发展尽绵薄之力!!
2026年09月17日 20:21
有3个网友回答
网友(1):

That's my brief experiences for the recent years. Rent business is full of competition, I will put my feet on the ground and make my fullest effort, always be humble and eager for learning, so as to fight for every single profit for the company. I sincerely hope you offer me the chance so that I can do my part for the development for company.

译者注:1,我把“望贵公司看后能给予工作的机会”这句话放在了最后,看起来更通顺。
2,租赁业分多种,英语表达也不一样,我假设你是房屋租赁业。
3,兄弟/姐妹,你这求职信有很多需要改进的地方啊。。。题外话了。。

网友(2):

Above is my simple experience, hope in recent years after reading your company can give the chance to work with for a rental industry as the industry, I will force widespread.i do every job, don't understand asked, accept modestly, does utmost for the company, for all interests, as well as the company's business development contribute!!

网友(3):

这样也许符合你的要求。
The above is my self-experience in recent years.Please give me a chance after you read it. Leasing industry is an extremely competitive business. For my part, I will do my job well step by step, steady and sure. More over, I will spare no efforts to further your interests, ask when I do not know, accept advice(接受建议) with an open mind. I definitely appreciate an opportunity to contribute to your trade development. Thank you!