I have never been to any foreign country except Inner Mongolia. The people there are keen on riding a horse and they live in yurt. I had once tasted milk tea of Inner Mongolia which is not sweet but saltish. Besides, I had also found something interesting that the eyes of Inner Mongolia people is not big generally, maybe it is because of the heavy sandy dust.
这段内容是很简单,主要就是句子句子之间的衔接要处理好。 但用although/though....but这种结构是绝对错误的,彻底的中式英语.....
Although i have not been to any foreign country, i have been to China's Inner Mongolia. People there have been keen on riding horse. They all live in Mongolian yurts. I have tried their milk tea. It was not sweet but a little salty. I also found out someting interesting---Mongolian people's eyes are not very big, because that place has heavy dust.
PS: 非机器翻译,我亲自翻译的。
Though i haven't been to any foreign country before,i have been to Neimenggu in China.People live there love riding and they live in menggubao.I tasted the milk tea there and it's not sweet but solty.Another ingterestring thing i found is that the residents' eyes are really not big because the dust are serious there.不知道翻译的能不能让你满意
Though I never do abroad,I had been to the Mongolia in China.There have many people who like riding a horse.People live there in the yurt.I have tasted the milk tea of Mongolia,it wasn't sweet,and a little salt.I found a interesting thing ,there people's eyes it's a little small,because it often have sand storm.
Although I haven't been to any foreign country,but I have been to inner Mongolia China.People are fond of riding there.They all live in yurts.I tasted the milk tea of inner Mongolia which was not sweet,but a little salty.I have found another interesting thing that the people in inner Mongolia have samall eyes,because of the heavy dust.
Although I haven't been to any other foreign countries, but I've been to China's Inner Mongolia. The people there are keen to ride. People living in the intervals. I tasted Inner Mongolia's milk tea, it is not a sweet, but a bit salty. I found an interesting thing, which was inner mongolians eyes are not very large, because dust. Inner Mongolia