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Thank you for teacher and school In a quiet night , the stars are blinking . Under the lamplight. Iseem to see the teacher’s silhouette I heart aches I’m thinking about teacher ‘ busy silhouette I heart aches. Oh, my dear teacher The tenth anniversary celebration is coming I am feel very pleased In here, I want to thank you Thank you for the year to the teaching of us. For this poem, I want to thank you. And thank this school: A! Teacher, thank you ! School, thank you ! 帮帮修改一下，看看哪些不是很好，老师说，背影哪一段，可我不知道怎么改...