【请】大家帮忙修改一下写给导师的英文询问信，不甚感激

申请推免中。不想用英文的，无奈对面导师偏爱英文，给我回复时流畅的英文把我很是激动了一下。结果脑袋一热，用中文回复TT，后来就后悔了。现在再度联系这位导师，想询问关于其课题组目前的研究方向的问题。好久没认真写英文了，还请大家多多指教(大改更好)!必有重谢!! （拜）Dear Prof.XX, I am writing the mail in purpose of asking for some advises on the research. Recently,i✀ve collected several papers written by your research group,they help me to enhance the cognition of diseases,such as mammary tumourigenesis、endometrial cancer and ataxia et al in Pathophysiological level. While reviewing Biochemistry,Pathology and Pathophysiology this summer,i✀m wondering if you,at your convenience,would like to recommend some further reading for me .Meanwhile,As I✀ve been in XX Hospital doing my intership since this semester started(now i✀m in Vascualr Surgery), so,if you would like to introduce some about the diseases your research group have been focused on,i✀ll do more study and prepartary work on them during my intership for the coming research activities . All these request above at your convenience.Looking forward to your reply with warm regardsSincerely yours.XX

2026年09月19日 05:56

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网友（1）：

有点乱，但是对于很久没有写英文的来说很好了。我没有在你原文上该，只是用括号加上了我的建议。另外我用的是美语格式和语法。

希望能帮到你

Dear Prof.XX,
[中间要空行]
I am writing the mail [this email,或者是this letter] in purpose of asking for some advises on the research [in regard of...] .(你最好在前面说明一下关于什么的research)
Recently,i've [I 要大写] collected [只用collected表示你只是收集了，建议你把它改成read and studied] several papers written by your research group, [用句号] they help me to enhance the cognition of diseases,such as mammary tumourigenesis、endometrial cancer and ataxia et al in Pathophysiological level [这里的专用词语我不太清楚，你最好确认一下]. While reviewing Biochemistry,Pathology and Pathophysiology this summer,i'm [大写I] wondering if you,at your convenience,would like to recommend some further reading [复数] for me.
Meanwhile,As I've been in XX Hospital doing my intership [拼写错误internship] since this semester started[改成since the beginning of this semester](now i'm [大写I] in Vascualr [拼错了Vascular] Surgery),[用句号，不要把句子拖得太长] so,if you would like to introduce some about the diseases [instead of using some about the diseases, 改成some of your current studies] your research group have been focused on,i'll [大写I] do more study and prepartary [要用preparatory] work on them during my intership [同上，internship] for the coming research activities . [请问一下，你之后的research是在他的指导下做吗？如果不是，那最好修改这段话。]

All these request [复数，requests] above [没有谓语，加are] at your convenience.
[一定要加这句：Thank you very much for all your help and support.]
Looking forward to your reply with warm regards [这句话不通，直接用looking forward to your reply.就好了]

Sincerely yours. [不是句号，用逗号] XX [你的名字要放在下一行]

网友（2）：

Dear Prof.XX,
I am writing this email begging for some advises on the research.
Recently,i've collected several papers written by your research group,they helped me improving the cognition of diseases,such as mammary tumourigenesis、endometrial cancer and ataxia et al . when reviewing Biochemistry,Pathology and Pathophysiology this summer,i wonder if you could recommend some further reading for me at your convenience? Meanwhile,I've been a Internship in XX Hospital since this semester started(now i'm in Vascualr Surgery), so,could you pls teach me something about the diseases your research group have been focused on,i'll do more study and preparations work on them during my intership for the coming research activities .

All these requests above are at your convenience.
Looking forward to your reply
with warm regards

Sincerely yours.XX

终于改完了，我们的思维方式不一样，呵呵，看起来有点累，你很认真，很想学习，我以前也是，加油哦。

网友（3）：

Dear Prof.XX,
I am writing to ask for your advices on the research.
Recently, I've collected several papers written by your research group, which help me a lot to enhance my understanding of diseases,such as mammary tumourigenesis, endometrial cancer and ataxia etc. on pathophysiological level. While reviewing biochemistry, pathology and pathophysiology this summer, i'm wondering whether you, at your convenience, would like to recommend some further reading materials for me .
Meanwhile, as I've been in XX Hospital for intership since the beginning of this semester (now i'm in Vascualr Surgery), and if you would like to introduce to me something about the diseases that your research group have been focusing on, I would be able to do more study and preparatory work on them for the coming research activities during my intership.

Your advice would be highly appreciated.
Looking forward to your reply with warm regards

Sincerely yours.XX

网友（4）：

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网友（5）：

Dear Prof.XX,

I am writing the mail to ask for some advises on the research.

Recently,i've been collecting several papers written by your research group,and so luckily they helped me a lot to enhance my cognition of diseases,such as mammary tumourigenesis、endometrial cancer and ataxia etc., all at Pathophysiological level. Thank you all.Well, While reviewing Biochemistry,Pathology and Pathophysiology this summer,i was wondering if it would be appropriate for me to get some recommendation from you about some further readings on this subject when you are convenient.

Besides,as was doing my Vascualr Surgery intership in XX Hospital since this semester started, i wanted to know something more about the diseases your group have been focusing on so that in my spare time i may do a good preparation for my coming research. i really want to make good use of my free hours.

All these request above are at your convenience. My last choice is to bother you, earnestly.

Looking forward to your reply.

with warm regards

Sincerely yours.

XX